New Monologue

I finished writing my own monologue after researching more about monologues. I used the theme of my previous monologue but changed it completely. My monologue is about a man who doesn't have water for his family and so has to walk very far in order to get it. While he walks he thinks about his situation and all of his thoughts make up the monologue. It isn't in very sophisticated language because I used the register I felt a man in poverty would speak in. The monologue narrates his walk and so has a beginning, middle and end which makes it more attractive for the audience. Also, in order for it to be more attractive, it is very emotional and in some way poetic. This allows the impact of the monologue to be more profound. I bettered my monologue by reading others and catching what makes them so useful.